总结托福考试写作笔记————Examples

举例

开头段和主体思路的例子

题目: 2018年12月8日(重复20121117NA/20131117ML)
One can learn a lot about another person from the books and the movies that the person likes.

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开头段:
How to learn more about another individual has always been the center of public attention.【替换When it comes to how to learn about another individual, opinions vary, based on people’s various backgrounds, experiences and values.】 Some people prefer to achieve this by learning about star signs, while others suggest judging by their fashion styles. However, from my perspective, one is able to learn a great deal about another person from the books and movies that he or she is fond of.
思路:
SP1: interests and hobbies
auto magazines, TV shows and even movies(The Fast and the Furious) featuring fancy sports cars →
a car freak:all kinds of vehicles like sedan, SUV, recreational vehicles
SP2:character and temperament
romantic novels:Gone With the Wind:emotional
alien novels:creative and willing to take risks

双边论证的例子

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A/D: Which one should the government invest in? Stadia体育场 or museums?
A+ :First off, stadia (deeply count) for the physical health of general citizens, so investments are heavily needed.
A+:What's more, stadia is the place for all kinds of (rock music concerts), which provide (temporary escape) for all.
让步段:Granted, museums function in important ways for the society to some degree as well. Some knowledge can be picked up by visiting the museums, and investment to build the museums is needed. (B+)
However, the problem will be solved if private investments are taken into account. The money for museums doesn't necessarily have to come from the government. In fact, there are so many private investments flocking to this field. eg. luxury business.

分情况讨论的例子1

A/D: The government should invest money on artists.

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对于(developed countries):bring merits, enrich spiritual life of general citizens
对于(underdeveloped countries/ poverty-stricken areas欠发达国家/贫困地区):highly unnecessary

分情况讨论的例子2

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Old building should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings.
From my perspective, whether to conserve or pull down old building is a question that can only be answered on a case-by-case basis.
When it comes to buildings with aesthetic, archaeological or architectural values, they should be properly maintained.
When it comes to other old buildings without specific value, entire destruction is an acceptable decision.

证明:收入越高,生活质量越高 //对比以下两段内容

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Take my friend Jason for example. Jason works in Beijing, and he has an incredibly high income. And of course, his life quality is very high. He has a lot of friends, and almost everyone envies him a lot. (23)分水平
Take my brother Jason for example. He works in Beijing as an 投行的人investment banker, and he could even earn over 1 million after tax each year. With such a handsome大量的钱 salary, he can always purchase items from top-tier顶级 brands such as Dior, soak himself in SK-II, dine in Michelin-starred restaurants such as Dadong, and of course afford to live in even penthouses. 顶层公寓
例证的原则:具体性+有效细节

例证细节填充

A/D:People should put emphasis on their appearance.

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主题句:
First off, a good appearance brings a good impression(可不可数都可以).
解释:
To explain it further, being presentable体面的 makes people feel more at ease when they attend formal events.
举例:Take my brother for instance. He once went to a job interview (unshaved), wearing (old jeans) and a (baggy overcoat) with a big (coffee stain) on it. We didn't know what happened there but he came home quite upset, with no good news.
(Nevertheless), after some contemplation思考, he decided to take another shot/have another . This time he did some serious preparation, having (the hair trimmed), putting on his (newly-bought suit and tie). It wasn't long before we heard that he got the job offer.
小结:
So it seems clear to me that the proper look conveys positive message to people around us.

要背的的综合写作模板:

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The reading and listening materials have a debate on … . The writer believes …, which is contradicted by the following lecturer.

Firstly, the author claims that … while the lecturer views this issue from an opposite angle. According to him/her …
Secondly, the writer states that … . However, the speaker opposes the writer’s opinion by saying that …
Thirdly, the passage argues that … . By contrast, in accordance with the professor, the reading’s claim does not hold water because …

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